revising my draft was no problem at all i was just basically good to go haha i just tried to correct some grammer made sure i had commas where they needed to be  added some more description into the body to make the readers more interested into the story kinda giving it that troublesome edge where im in danger ulltimatly it went pretty smooth i wrote my into and conclusion and trasnitioned it into the body pretty much wrappped up my story did spell check fixed a couple fragment sentances and i was completly good to go on my project essay (100)