i have a few questions for my reviewer, what was my srong points in my paper? did i use good transitions? what about word choice? do you like the discription of the scene i give? do i make a valad point in your eyes? what could i do beter next time? what do you think i shoud change? is it clear the point im trying to get acrosss to the reader? are all my sentances fluent? how is my intro and conclusion? what do you think i should change? do i examine my scense enough? (114)