when revising my drafts i have to take lots of thing into consideration spelling punctuation orgnization and so on i started revising by going over notes i took when my teacher and i were talking about my paper in class so i ended up reorgnizing things so it does not jump around so much then i led on to making sure everying flowed agiain once that was donw it was as easy as spell checking and making sure all fragments and runons were delt with then i just double checked all my work made sure no mistakes were made  and finished off my conclusion (104)